Sunday, March 16, 2014
Brian Turner's Poems
The words that Brian Turner uses in his writings are so descriptive and it seems that he likes to use symbolism throughout the different poems we read. In his poem The Hurt Locker, Turner is describing the only thing that soldiers have left to hold on to after everything is the hurt, physically and emotionally. The last line of this poem, "Open the hurt locker and learn how rough men come hunting for souls" really takes me by surprise. Reading that men are hunting for the souls of other men is not a description you hear every day about soldiers in the war. While we know that they are there to fight for and defend their country, never do we seem to realize what they are taking away from their enemies. In Turner's poem R&R, he seems to be forcing his mind to think of other things to distract him from the fact that he is so worn out. Describing a girl and being with her escapes what he is actually going through. Turner also seems to take what the soldiers are actually doing and attempt to turn it into a more pleasurable experience by describing them being on the beach playing volleyball. In What Every Soldier Should Know, I interpreted some of Turner's statements as something with much bigger meaning than what you would think. "Always enter a home with your right foot; the left is for cemeteries and unclean places" seems to me like Turner is explaining that when entering a home during war, you should always be as prepared as possible. Since majority of the population is right-handed, your right foot would appear to be the dominant foot, and stepping into to an unfamiliar home with it first shows that you must have control and power. When he explains that some men earn eighty dollars to attack you, five thousand to kill, this is something that to me at least was not really seen in wars before today. Just like a lot of things in society, money seems to be the way to get things done nowadays.
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ReplyDeleteYou brought up a lot of good points. I agree that Turner is very descriptive in his writing. I think Turner has the same writing style as O’Brien—very candid but still evocative and appeals to the readers’ emotions.
ReplyDeleteI want to say that you brought up a great metaphor when Turner mentions entering the home with the right foot. I believe that is open to several interpretation and I really like your take on it. However, in the literal sense, it is common etiquette in the Muslim culture to enter the house with the right foot and to enter places like the cemetery with the left foot. Ask me why and I don’t really have an answer for that—my apologies, haha.
Nonetheless, your metaphor captured the intensity of war in general. Similar to Vietnam war, soldiers have to adapt to new cultures in order to survive and also to familiarize themselves with the setting they are placed in. They sometimes even pick up on new languages and it just shows how disparate war is to reality.
I really like how you pointed out that soldiers hunt for their enemies souls in Turner's poem. It really captured me by surprise too and I never thought of it that way. Not only are these people killing and hurting each other, but they are also taking away their souls and stripping them of themselves. It's very intense and it is also something that I don't hear everyday about soldiers either. It's a different way of describing what happens when someone goes to war. Once a soldier's soul is gone and if a soldier survives the war, how do people expect them to be normal and live as a normal civilian?
ReplyDelete"Open the hurt locker and learn how rough men come hunting for souls” is one of my favorite lines in this book. Turner is very aggressive in his writing and very descriptive with gruesome details but this quote for me, is the most aggressive of the book. It shows the true fact of what a soldiers job is, no sugar coating, no bullshit. Turner describes bullets ripping through flesh and bone which is apart of being a soldier more specifically an infantrymen, but “hunting for souls” is what it is at the end of the day what infantrymen do.
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